Summer of '76

On a mountain top outside Narvik, Norway

Turns out that in the story, Carensa makes it to Narvik, far up there in the Land of the Midnight Sun, with fjords and mountains. Some important things happen there and developing that segment has taken a while. She finds herself in a situation that could have several outcomes, including bodily harm …

Most Americans traveling in Europe didn’t make it that far north. Even going as far north as Stockholm was stretching it. But some brave souls did venture on and Carensa is one of them.

Like many places, Narvik has changed a lot since 1976, so when I started researching locations, I wasn’t all that hopeful. Then it turned out that the Youth Hostel there back then was in a really interesting old building with a great view of the fjord. I couldn’t have made that one up any better. And I found the perfect mountain spot for her to visit as well. These days, residential areas are climbing up the mountain, but back then it would have been the wilderness right outside the city, with a grand view of the Narvik harbor and the fjord beyond.

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148,521

Words that is. In the script so far.

Closeup of words and word count on a manuscript pageWith most of the manuscript fairly well fleshed out by now (though a few holes still exist and need to be filled), I decided to run a word count. The book is currently divided into 24 segments that correspond to logical portions of Carensa’s travel calendar (rather than actual book chapters. I went through each segment, obtained a word count and then added them all up.

The grand total is 148,521 words. Wow, that’s a lot of typing (and much was handwritten in first draft!). But how does that compare with some famous books?

My all-time favorite, The Lord of the Rings: Fellowship of the Ring has 187,000 words, The Two Towers, 155,000 and The Return of the King has 131,000 words.

Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone — 76,944 words
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets — 85,141 words
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban — 107,253 words
Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire — 190,637 words
Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix — 257,045 words
Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince — 168,923 words
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows — 198,227 words

So much for comparison. I’ve also heard that a manuscript from an unknown author (and, yes, yours truly does fall in that category, even if he knows perfectly well who he is) should land in the 80,000 — 120,000 word range for the script to get a chance at being read.

I think it is worth noting that J.K. Rowling started out on the low end with the first Harry Potter book and then as the series became established, let the books expand. Maybe I should turn Carensa’s summer in Europe into a series? On second thought, I’ll do some rewriting and editing instead. There is after all a lot to be said for at least some modicum of economy of words in story telling.

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The locker

girl sitting with backpacksA dog is man’s best friend they say. That may be true for around home, unless you are a cat person instead. But what about out on the road? Talking specifically about guys and gals train hiking around Europe here.

At that point, all your worldly belongings of any importance (since they are the only ones with you) are in your backpack. Even if you follow Rick Steves’ advice and pack ultra-light, there are still plenty of times when you don’t really want to carry that big backpack with you wherever you go (like climbing all the steps and winding streets to the Jardin Exotique in Monaco).

So what did we do with those backpacks? If you are staying in a hostel or hotel, the answer is simple: leave it there. But for all the days when you are not staying somewhere, your new BFF was the luggage locker/left luggage office at a train station.

station locker signIn the ’70s every self-respecting train station had lockers or a luggage office.

If the latter, then just get in line, hand over your backpack and watch the guys in the office store it for you, which might include anything from just dropping it on the floor in a pile with all the other backpacks to putting it on a large tray that went on a conveyor belt down to the nether regions of the train station. Either way you got a piece of paper with a number and some scribbles on it—your claim ticket. Not to be lost, folded, spindled or mutilated, lest you never see the backpack again.

If the station you were at had lockers, the trick now was to find an empty locker that your backpack fit in. If you followed Rick Steves’ packing list to the T, you could use just about any locker. For the rest of us who had full frame backpacks with a sleeping bag attached, the hunt was on for the large lockers. Once you found an empty one, you shoved the backpack in, deposited the required coins, turned the key and took it with you. The key went into a safe pocket, not to be dropped or lost.

Generally you could leave your backpack for up to 72 hours, which meant you could even do an overnight side trip and come back for the backpack before the time was up.

On the rare occasion that the station had neither a left luggage office nor lockers, walking around to the train dispatcher’s office and asking really, really nice, just might convince them to let you leave your luggage in a corner in their office for a few hours.

In Monaco in August 1977, the lockers were full, there was no luggage office and the adventurous among the train hikers just left their backpacks in a pile on the platform while checking out the city. I admit that I was less adventurous and carried my backpack with me while climbing up to the Jardin Exotique, as well as going down to the breakwater in the harbor (although there were plenty of backpacks there). I just kept telling myself that it was all good exercise and when I was finally floating in the azure-blue waters off the breakwater, it was all good.

Footnote: These days lockers are not nearly as common at train stations. Something to do with security and the threat of terrorism. Somehow life was simpler back then, when the only terrorists who put bombs in train station lockers was the IRA and that was up in England.

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